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I joined on January 1970, I've made 9 posts
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Post by Michael Maddox on Nov 8, 2018 1:19:04 GMT
I was wondering if I could have some feedback from my last Saga rp thanks in advanced =) |
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Divine Wrestler
I joined on January 1970, I've made 18 posts
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Post by Michael Rissi on Nov 9, 2018 21:42:10 GMT
I thought your RP was good, it was a good read and it gave an insight into Mike Maddox's tendencies.
Perhaps you want to be a little more detailed and give an insight not only into what Maddox is doing and saying but also into describing his inner thoughts and feelings in more detail during those descriptive non-dialogue parts as well as giving the reader a clearer picture of Maddox's frame of mine and also maybe the setting.
Good character development and story. Decent shoot and well written. Just maybe work on detailed analysis of the match/opponent as it will eliminate the risk of sounding repetitive which is easy for anyone to do in a RP. Overall a good RP with great character story.
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